Moonrise
The rock pools fill, long liquid fingers
invade the mounds of seawrack
in the midday heat; the incoming
tide moves swiftly, dangerously,
covering my footprints.
It will recede: the relief is ephemeral,
the sun still burns the skin,
the craving will not be satisfied here.
Far better to wait for nightfall,
for the cool moon reflected, refracted,
as she extends a silver pathway
over the dark waves,
and silently calls me by name.
invade the mounds of seawrack
in the midday heat; the incoming
tide moves swiftly, dangerously,
covering my footprints.
It will recede: the relief is ephemeral,
the sun still burns the skin,
the craving will not be satisfied here.
Far better to wait for nightfall,
for the cool moon reflected, refracted,
as she extends a silver pathway
over the dark waves,
and silently calls me by name.
10 Comments:
What a wonder display of words. They evoke feelings of both heat and the comfort of coolness, of anticipation and reward. How many times have we all had the same experience?
Thank You
very very nice, i like this one alot! Is that a new do you sportin? like that too.
Contrasts that draw me into your words - I can feel the heat - long for the coolness I want to follow the pathway.
Very very...12th house. And lovely.
I feel the tug and pull, the ebb and flow, of tide and desire in this. Nicely woven together!
Beautiful imagery. I can just imagine myself there. Hot sun, cool moon - wonderful contrast, beautifully expressed. Thank you!
So beautiful. Thankyou. Just what I need right now.
A little scary too. Like R. Frost looking into the dark woods. Just what is he longing for?
Wow, this is wonderful. Very nice.
Thank you all - it's scarey sometimes posting a poem and your comments mean a lot.
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