Sunday, February 26, 2006

Space

The space between
my invitation

and your reply

intense
invisible
so small, yet
stretching beyond the edges
of my universe.

12 Comments:

Blogger LJ said...

Ohhhh. I know that silence.

12:32 pm  
Blogger rdl said...

oh my, so much in so little.

2:08 pm  
Blogger Tamar said...

This is so meaningful. It seems to connect with what I wrote about loaded silence this morning.

It made me sigh ... deeply.

2:43 pm  
Anonymous Jessie said...

Amazing how many parts of that space carry meaning--the context, the size of it, what happens in it--and on the other side of it, a message has been conveyed...

5:41 pm  
Blogger zhoen said...

(o)

8:00 pm  
Blogger Becca said...

poignant ... full ... pregnant with feeling and anticipation.

11:01 pm  
Blogger MB said...

There is so much we can't know, can't control. It forces leaps of faith, either inner or outer! This is really a loaded little piece (nicely so).

11:46 pm  
Blogger Amishlaw said...

I love that poem.

2:07 pm  
Blogger Dale said...

Oh. Ow. Like Sting says, "why would you want to put yourself through all that again?"

But we always do :-)

12:16 am  
Blogger Mary said...

Thank you all.

1:01 pm  
Blogger leslee said...

Oh my. Absolutely.

2:14 pm  
Blogger Sarah Louise said...

so true. thanks for putting this gem out there for us to read and enjoy.

6:50 pm  

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